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Baidoo 2 Vida Baidoo Professor Morris ENG 010: Developmental Writing 2 March 2011 A Healthy Family One day I had an argument with my mum and I decided to leave home and then live my friends so I could have my peace. I felt sick one day that I had nobody to help me, my friends whom I had relied on would never think of leaving their jobs to stay home with me. I really missed my mum and what she always says, that “ if you have a family , then you have health. ‘ If you have a Family, then you have life as a whole since the rise and fall of every individual depends solely on the family also the family forms the basic unit of our society; therefore our communities are only as healthy as our families. Let us look at the family as a body of individuals who seek for unity . Each individual member of a family has the need to be accepted not by, but as part of the whole body. Simply put, if a member of a healthy family feels needed, loved and safe, then there is a great job being done in keeping a family healthy and this could be considered as a family in a good general health Baidoo 1 Vida Baidoo . Professor Morris ENG 010: Developmental Writing 2 March 2011 A Healthy Family I. Introduction A. Attention — getter: My mum’s story B. Main points 1. Guardian 2. Education 3. Pleasure C. Thesis: If you have a family, then you have life as a whole since the rise and fall of every individual depends solely on the family, also the family forms the basic unit of our society therefore our communities are only as healthy as our families. D. Subject: A family full of love constitutes a healthy family. II. Main point1: Guardian A. Parents B. Aunt/Uncle III. Main point 2: Education A. School B. Regular check IV. Main point 3: Pleasure A. Vacation B. Gifts V. Conclusion A. Restate thesis: Being in a family really makes you what you are and will be and what you will be goes a long way to affect the society you live in. B. Main points 1. Guardian 2. Education 3. Pleasure C. Tie back to attention getter: A healthy family D. Larger scale: Love